Showing posts with label WIP. Show all posts
Showing posts with label WIP. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 17, 2015

WIP it Wednesday: That's enough Little One



I am pleased to be here again today to share a snippet from my next book "Savannah Rebels" it is the second book in the Savannah series but can also be read alone.

You can get the first book Savannah's Surrender here:

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00XZOZ4UY


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Savannah Rebel's tells the tale of Hilton and Savannah's first low since they began  practicing domestic discipline.

Hilton was very proud of Savannah's progress.  She very rarely broke any rules and there was hardly ever any need for punishments anymore. So, when Savannah did mess up a little bit he decided to go easy on her and let things slide from time to time.

  Savannah was grateful for the reprieve at first but in time she grew insecure with the loss of tight boundaries. Eventually she became resentful and she began to rebel.

Can Hilton reign Savannah back in?

Will Savannah submit to be led again?



The following is an unedited erotic scene form the book:

“That’s enough, Little One,” I said pulling her up by her hair. “I want that naughty ass of yours bent over the end of this bed,” I instructed as I led her, hair still in hand. Once there I pushed her gently and she fell into position. “What a naughty girl you are,” I said warming her bottom with a fresh blanket of spanks.

She was more turned on than I had ever seen her before. I spanked and she raised her bottom to my hand wanting more. I rubbed my long hard shaft over her soaked slit and entered her forcefully. She yelled out, “Oh Hilton, Please.”

“Please what? Baby Girl,” I answered her.

“Please, fuck me,” she moaned.

Teasing her I penetrated her slowly. The pink plug peaked out from between her cheeks. Her channel was so tight with her ass filled. Testing her even more I put pressure on the plug as I fucked her and she moaned loudly. She didn’t resist. “Play with that pussy while I fuck you,” I commanded.

Her hand quickly found her mound and began rubbing furiously. I pulled on the plug and began working it in and out of her tight bud while I penetrated her front slowly with the same rhythm. Soon she shuttered and lay lifeless over the end of the bed while her juices soaked my cock. The plug slid from her bottom to the floor. I left it there. Once her breathing slowed, I grabbed her hair and hammered my shaft into her wet slit forcefully until I exploded myself and then I collapsed over her, all my energy spent.  

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Wednesday, June 10, 2015

WIP IT UP

 
 



I am pleased to be here again today to share a snippet from my next book "Savannah Rebels" it is the second book in the Savannah series but can also be read alone.

You can get the first book Savannah's Surrender here:

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00XZOZ4UY


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Savannah Rebel's tells the tale of Hilton and Savannah's first low since they began  practicing domestic discipline.
 
Hilton was very proud of Savannah's progress.  She very rarely broke any rules and there was hardly ever any need for punishments anymore. So, when Savannah did mess up a little bit he decided to go easy on her and let things slide from time to time.
 
  Savannah was grateful for the reprieve at first but in time she grew insecure with the loss of tight boundaries. Eventually she became resentful and she began to rebel.
 
Can Hilton reign Savannah back in?

Will Savannah submit to be led again?
 
 
The following is an unedited erotic scene form the book:

 
I retrieved the baby oil from the bedside table and began massaging her back gently. I felt the tension flow from her body as she allowed herself to relax. Soon my hands moved to her bottom and I began groping her erotically. I rubbed her soft buttocks then her back then returned to her bottom and finally I dipped my fingers down and grazed her nether lips. She raised her pelvis giving me better access and she moaned. Whoa, this wasn’t going to be easy. Touching her this way had me rock hard. Her body slick with oil was one of the most beautiful things I had ever seen. I wanted to stop and fuck her so bad. There was a purpose to all of this though. We were going to work on submission. Sexual submission.  I needed to keep my focus.
 
 My hands continued to massage Savannah’s bottom. I began testing her limits. I traced her slit and ran my finger up and down her butt crack. When I neared her tight bud she began to tense. I knew she would. I had attempted to touch her there erotically in the past but she was shy and couldn’t let herself relax into it. She always stopped me right away. I wasn’t going to allow her to fight me this time. Her body was mine. I needed to talk her through it. She was going to learn to submit to me, even in this most intimate way.
 
I gave her a sharp swat to the center of her butt. “Oh no Little One,” I soothed. “You are not going to fight me. I want you to be a good girl and let me touch you as I please. We need to work on your submission. I want it to become a habit for you to readily submit to me. Your submission needn’t be only to punishment,” I spoke to her softly as I continued massaging her back and bottom. “We are going to begin submission exercises unrelated to punishment. I want you to surrender your body to me. One of the biggest acts of submission a woman can give her husband is allowing him to penetrate her ass. I want that from you. Show me you are willing to give that to me,” I said as I eased my fingers closer to her tight ring. She remained still her butt cheeks relaxed. Perfect, exactly what I wanted from her. I tested her further by circling her puckered hole, “Good girl,” I said offering her encouragement. “I’m so proud of you. I promise I will take things slow and won’t push things too fast.” She remained relaxed and open to my touch, allowing me to touch her in a more intimate way than I ever had before.
 
 

 
 
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Tuesday, June 2, 2015

WIP IT UP WEDNESDAY



This is my first time participating in the WIP blog hop but I am pleased to be here today to share a snippit into my next book "Savannah Rebels" it is the second book in the Savannah series but can also be read alone.

You can get the first book Savannah's Surrender here:

http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=ntt_athr_dp_sr_1?_encoding=UTF8&field-author=Lillyanna%20Rose&search-alias=digital-text&sort=relevancerank
 
 
Savannah Rebel's tells the tale of Hilton and Savannah's first low since they began  practicing domestic discipline.
 
Hilton was very proud of Savannah's progress.  She very rarely broke any rules and there was hardly ever any need for punishments anymore. So, when Savannah did mess up a little bit he decided to go easy on her and let things slide from time to time.
 
  Savannah was grateful for the reprieve at first but in time she grew insecure with the loss of tight boundaries. Eventually she became resentful and she rebelled.
 
Can Hilton reign Savannah back in?

Will Savannah submit to be led again?
 
 
In this scene Savannah lashes out at Hilton and he decides that enough is enough.

  “You know what Hilton just do whatever you want,” I hissed. “I’ve handled our money for years and we never had these issues. Doesn’t seem to matter though. You never listen to me.”  I turned to storm away and he grabbed my arm tight. “I’ve had enough Savannah,” he yelled. “You will not talk to me that way! Do you understand me?” he said as he pulled me over his lap. Before I even knew what was happening he was landing hard swats on my tight covered bottom. “Stop Hilton! Your hurting me,” I cried as I squirmed to get away. I felt his fingers reach for my waist band to bare my bottom I yelled “Nooooo” and fought to stand and he let me go.

 I ran into the bathroom and locked the door before sliding down the wall sobbing uncontrollably. He let me get away. I wasn’t even worth the fight.

 He followed me and tried to open the door. He told me to let him in but I just continued to sob.
In time he forced it open. I looked up at him though my tears to see him staring at me shaking his head. He turned around closed the door and walked away.

 Abandoned, unloved, not worth it, a failure. Those were the thoughts behind my wails.

I couldn’t even understand the feelings I was having myself. I couldn’t ask Hilton to, could I?
 
 I didn’t want him to let me go. I wanted him to make me stay, even spank my thighs until I stopped fighting like he used to when we first started DD. I wanted him to calmly talk me through the punishment like he sometimes did when I was struggling. I could hear it in my head. “It’s ok Savannah. It’s almost over. Be a good girl and take your spanking. You know you earned it and we will both feel better when it’s over. Only 10 more.  Count them for me. Good girl.”
 
Instead he let me go, found me sobbing and turned around and walked away. It felt final, like I had broken the last straw. I wondered where he went. I thought maybe he just left. He had left me before. I obviously wasn’t worth staying for.

 


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