This is my first Saturday Spankings Post:) I'm super excited to be dipping my toes into the author world. Enjoy a tiny peak into my first ever novel, "To Love, Honor and Obey." This is a work in progress and is subject to change.
To Love Honor and Obey is based on a true story. It tells a tale of a married couple, Jordan and Lillyanna Rose, who are enduring some marital discord.
Jordan walked out on Lilly over six months ago. After numerous attempts to resolve their issues on their own with no progress Jordan decided it was time to call it quits. Lillyanna was too stubborn and she wasn't going to compromise on anything. He was ready to file for divorce.
Lilly was devastated. She wanted her husband back but she wasn't going to let him tell her how and what to do. She talked Jordan into trying Christian marriage counseling believing that the pastor would surely take her side.
Lilly and Jordan are both shocked when Pastor James suggested that they adopt a Domestic discipline lifestyle. The pastor recommends that Jordan starts spanking Lilly’s bottom if she disobeys or becomes disrespectful. He ensures them that Jordan taking control of Lilly will quickly end their discord.
Will Jordan spank Lilly? Can Domestic Discipline save their failing marriage?
Lilly knew Jordan had his belt in his hand. She heard the telling sound of the clinking buckle as he unbuckled it and the slither of him removing it from his pants. It was a sound she’d heard hundreds of times, although Jordan whipping her with it had never crossed her mind before this moment. This time she knew Jordan intended to spank her and it was terrifying. The thoughts of the pain the belt would cause when it met her bottom for the first time was horrifying. Lilly’s heart was pounding in her chest. She could feel the sweat beading on her body. She wasn’t sure she could do this anymore.
I hope you enjoyed your sneak peak:) Comments and constructive criticism are welcome. Enjoy the hop and check out all the other authors.
This is where the rubber meets the road! Looking forward to reading more. Welcome to Saturday Spankings. Are you writing under the same name as your character? Are you writing a fictionalized biography? I am curious about your author branding.
ReplyDeleteHi Cara! I'm star struck:) lol... some of first books on my kindle are written by you. So I really appreciate you taking the time to read here today. My pen name is Lillyanna Rose. My first story is based on the story of my husband and I and our start with DD. Kathyern Blake spent sometime working with me yesterday and also suggested that I may want to change the heroines name. I'm still learning and your advice is much appreciated! Thanks again for stopping by.
DeleteOh, the sound of that belt swishing through the loops - so exciting yet so fearful the very first time.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Saturday Spankings.
Oh, yes it is :) Thanks for the welcome!
DeleteYippee, you made it.
ReplyDeleteOh a belt - that's one for the heart rate :)
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DF
Yes I made it DF:) Thanks for your help! We have much to chat about. Talk to you soon.
ReplyDeleteAh yes, it's funny how a sound you've heard a thousand times intensifies when it has a new meaning. Nicely done.I'm very interested to see more of this. Welcome to Satspanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tara:) Feeling a bit amature for this crowd but I'm still learning.
DeleteCongrats, can't wait to hear more!! The belt definitely can create some intense reactions.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jennelle:) I agree. The belt is not one of my favorite implements to be spanked with. Especially for punishment. Although Jordan has a way of using it for pleasure:)~
DeleteWelcome to SatSpanks! I love the belt and definitely love the sound of it coming off. Mmmmm. But the feel is completely different if it is for punishment.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the welcome Megan! Thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteI like the sneak peek.
ReplyDeleteWant more!!
Meredith
Thanks for reading Meredith:) More to come!
DeleteWelcome to Saturday Spankings, Lillyanne, and I hope we hear a lot more from you. Great tease!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathryn:) I really appreciate all your help! I love the dividers :)
DeleteThe belt is not always as sexy as it sounds. I always wonder if there are really pastors or counselors who suggest DD. I heard that there are, too bad there aren't more. Great snippet, can't wait to read the rest
ReplyDeleteHi Blondie. The story is based on the story of Jordan and I... so yes there really are Pastors out there who suggest DD:)~ I'm glad you liked it! More to come...
DeleteWelcome to Saturday Spankings, Lillyanna. What a wonderful first post. I hope we see and hear more about Lilly and Jordan. I curious to learn if the pastor's advice helped. ☺
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the welcome:) more to come!
DeleteWelcome to Sat Spanks Lillyanna! I loved your first snippet. There's nothing like the sound of a belt sliding through the loops :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the warm welcome Constance :) I agree... a sound like no other!
DeleteGreat snippet Lillyanna! :) I found your blog! Many hugs,
ReplyDelete<3 Katie
Thanks Katie:)~ I'm glad you found it and let me know you were here!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to #SatSpanks. Loved the snippet.
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